[Ebony Sable]

Commissions available. Images for Information. Also known as Bribery.
Here's the rules:

• Say what you want me to draw. You can PM me or post here.
  
• Tell me what information you are going to put on the Dofus Wikia.
  
• Wait a few minutes.
  
• Put the information up. Anonymous edits are fine, as long as I know that you've done it.
  
• Wait a few days for your picture.

Will also accept kamas on Rosal (Dofus), kamas/items on Tiva (Wakfu) or items on WakfuGardiens_02 (Wakfu Les Gardiens 2).

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I've been drawing Dofus related stuff since not long after I started playing. Some of the drawings aren't so bad that I don't dare upload them. This thread contains some of the better ones.
My current sig, containing my Sramette and Iopette:

An earlier picture of my Sramette (colours have faded a lot!):


Comments and critiques are welcome! Please tell me what I'm doing wrong!

This post has been edited by Ebony Sable: 10 April 2011 - 06:16 AM

[Ebony Sable]

What, no criticisms? I'm surprised! And disappointed. Either no one thinks there's anything wrong with my pictures (highly unlikely), no one thinks anything of my pictures (possible) or no one's looked at them (most likely). Here's another one:

A comic for Al Howin:

[Ebony Sable]

A picture of an Osa:


Oh, man. I didn't realise how flat that face is...

[Ebony Sable]

What, it wasn't bad enough to get a comment? How about this one? And no, I didn't draw it specifically to get a comment. It's a year or so old.

[sharpestshooter]

ur drawings are decent... but your people lack a certain anatomy... and lacks value, when you shade you want to round it the way the object turns, rather then just colouring in any which way, but other then that you have a pretty decent start

[Ebony Sable]

sharpestshooter, on Mar 7 2010, 01:08 PM, said:

ur drawings are decent... but your people lack a certain anatomy... and lacks value, when you shade you want to round it the way the object turns, rather then just colouring in any which way, but other then that you have a pretty decent start

Which pictures particularly? The first one is the second most recent (Sramette and Iopette with a wabbit). All the others with characters are at least a year old. And my shading was done is pencil, so, yeah, it's a little hard to get any rounding. I've learned my lesson, I now colour on the computer.

I'd like very specific criticisms, so I know exactly what to improve.

[the-brown-stain]

I like the little arachnee on the hat, its cute :> and the facial expressions. I think you should look at the size ratio you have going on.. like the srams thigh from knee to vag is 1/2 the size of her shin. Also your lines are very straight..maybe try to define the joints and curves of the body more

[Ebony Sable]

Ok, thanks, I'll bear those in mind. I'm working on getting muscle structure better. I realise it's one of my weaknesses. I'll bear in mind proportion as another weakness.

[Ebony Sable]

Well, that discussion seems to have ended. Here's a random-ish sketch:


Yes, I know the colours of the ribs and chest are the wrong way around. The ribs should be white. I think I was working on placement. And that is a badly-drawn Borbat in the corner.

[Ebony Sable]

Bumping with some really poorly drawn sort-of-chibis:


Not certain why they're so faded. I might have drawn them too lightly, and I didn't dare risk inking them. Yes, I draw Sramettes a lot. It means I don't have to draw so many facial features.

[Ebony Sable]

Female Eliatrope:

[ianianianianian]

Ebony Sable, on Mar 16 2010, 07:48 PM, said:

Female Eliatrope:

Not saying I'm in any position to critique, but you seem desperate to get some feedback. Art is subjective, and i'm sure in some contexts your art may be considered vintage, abstract even. It seems like expressionist art to me, but then again, i'm sure that wasn't your goal.

I think that

1. You need to realize that a character isn't simply 2d. You seem to shed all concept of right angles and geometric precision whilst drawing.
2. The eyes you use in your drawing are... scary, to me, atleast. I suggest you learn how to curve eyes or atleast draw eyes better.

I don't know how much this helps. But I hope it did.



Ian.

[Ebony Sable]

Every critique helps. I'm not sure what you mean by "expressionist", but I'll look it up later. I'm not sure what you mean in your first point, either.
However, I'm currently tossing around a few ways to draw eyes. If you look at the first drawing in this thread (the one that's currently in my sig), I was trying to draw eyes far more realistically. However, these characters are cartoonish... I'm still testing a few things.

I'm surprised you didn't point out that her facial features are crooked! That was the first thing I noticed when I finished, and I couldn't be bothered fixing it.

[Ebony Sable]

Well, looked up expressionist. I was trying for realism. Looks like I haven't quite got it yet. I want to be a good drawer, like all the other people here on Imps.
How's this one? Not based on anything, not humanoid at all. (You can't argue with this one! If you do, it will hunt you down and keel you!)

Sorry about the writing on the legs, but I was bored and drew on the nearest paper to hand. Had to erase the printing via the computer. I don't think you can read it.

This post has been edited by Ebony Sable: 18 March 2010 - 04:21 PM

[Ebony Sable]

I drew this one just yesterday. A personal record! Drawn, inked and scanned in one day! It's a comic strip called First Impressions.

[kyck]

I like the rabbit your best work by far, but the only thing that seems to creep me out are his eyes, they just dont look cuddly at all o.o

I love the comic strip made me lawl

[Ebony Sable]

The eyes were the first thing I drew in that rabbit. I drew an eye. The rabbit turned up out of nowhere. It's a demonic rabbit! Ahhh! RUN!
Thanks about the comic strip, I'm working on another. Just need to check out what a few monster look like, and find a piece of paper to draw it on.

[Ebony Sable]

Photobucket's playing up and won't let me upload anything (and my mouse is being a pain), so instead getting the next comic strip, you get something that was already uploaded.

[Ebony Sable]

Occasional, I said. Occasional. Hmm.

Continuing with the Tofu comic, here's one that should really be for Valentine's Day:

I need a thinner pen.

And a better Eliatrope. Took me three or four weeks to draw. See if you can guess which two parts I drew last:


By the way, these are temporary links until Photobucket starts working properly. When it does, I'll move these to the correct place and update the links. Managed to fix Photobucket!

This post has been edited by Ebony Sable: 08 April 2010 - 01:31 AM

[Ebony Sable]

Easter?

This post has been edited by Ebony Sable: 08 April 2010 - 01:31 AM